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When i first met you
That's when i knew
I knew that moment,
That i loved you.

Tell me that I'm beautiful,
but my mind scares you.
I know your lying..
but i also know your trying.

I'll forever love you, if you let me.
And I'll love you, if you don't make me stop.

We aren't the biggest, or the best
but baby we are us.
In this world of black and white,
you give my dark life light..

This will never end..... right?





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writer_girlx14 said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 1:39 am
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!!!
 
Sill_Sitter11 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 11:02 pm
Love. This. My favorite of yours. And you HAD me. You HAD me. You had me into your words and I felt the pain and love. Thats not an easy thing to do... get me wrapped up in poems. But then, THEN! You had to say... right? And you lost me. But other then that.... LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!
 
Joe B. said...
May 27, 2010 at 9:43 am
great poem, again. only a few grammatical errors, can't see anything else wrong. 4/5
 
HeronHero said...
May 13, 2010 at 5:45 pm
This is also really good, I think you should build it up some more, but other than that you did a great job!:)
 
BabyV replied...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 6:49 pm
This is goood, and your feeling is always very clear. It allows the reaer to know who u really are, and what u went through
 
respecturself7 replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 3:33 pm
This is really cool. I love how you painted it as the dark lusting for light. Original and mysterious.
 
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