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The gentle wind caressing my skin,

As I look up to the sky

I shut my eyes, breath in the air

The day has just slipped by

I rest upon a watching Oak

Whispering longing words

If I could just be free, please

Make me a bird

I’d be a mockingbird,

And sing of my own song

Or maybe a scarlet-crested robin,

Tending to my young

The blood-red of a cardinal,

Perching on a pine

A velvet-purple coronet,

The intriguing color of wine

Maybe plain and fitting,

The brown of a sparrow

I long to be a blue jay,

Striking in the snow

I open my eyes and spread my arms

As the suns abandons day

Please make me a bird,

So I can fly away




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Eilatan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 16, 2010 at 12:21 pm:
I know how you feel... this is very good writing
 
sydney_hopeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 16, 2010 at 5:18 pm :
Thank you, that's really nice of you :) I wrote this as a personal poem, and to use in a story I was going to write, but I haven't gotten around to it. :/
 
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munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 4:42 am:
I liked this poem.. especially the start of it, the descriptions are vivid
 
Sydney P. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 5:18 am :
Aww, thank you :) that's sweet. I'll check out some of your writing.
 
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