Are We in Love?

February 12, 2010
By J.AnnDaniels SILVER, Dededo, Other
J.AnnDaniels SILVER, Dededo, Other
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Are we in love?
Cause I can’t tell
When you’re around, my heart doesn’t swell.
When you’re away, I feel ... okay.
My heart doesn’t seem to ache or care.
Your hugs and kisses are now something to bear.
My mind feels so muddled all the time.
So I guess to answer that question, this answer is mine.
I fell out of love with you.
No, I don’t feel the same.
I’m sorry. I know it’s not okay,
But I hope you’ll forgive me maybe if one day.



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on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:09 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Its Great! most of the time people just say oh im in LOVE or who the heck are you get OUT. lol no really. the true emotions.

on Feb. 27 2010 at 12:56 pm
JerseyLiar9 GOLD, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"You've got to learn to move on, because life will move on. If you don't move on, you'll just end up in over your head."

"Never regret anything because at the time, it was exactly what you wanted."

"We accept the love we think we deserve."

I love this poem!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 5:30 am
paranomial PLATINUM, Hyderabad, Other
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on Feb. 27 2010 at 5:30 am
paranomial PLATINUM, Hyderabad, Other
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ur poem is wonderful..u've written down ur feelings..n its come out really well :)

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:42 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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