6 scents of amazement

February 21, 2010
By LL&S.PEB GOLD, Webster Groves, Missouri
LL&S.PEB GOLD, Webster Groves, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The Best things in life are unseen, that is why we close our eyes to kiss, cry, and dream.


Have you ever heard the wind whistle
Across your ear
So softly it was more tempting to hear?

Have you seen the sun shine so bright
It looks different
When you go inside?

Have you smelt the salt sent
Of the air






























When your by a ocean
That cant even compare to a smell
That is back else where?

Have you ever tasted a sweet
Treat with only one bite
But it was so good you
Couldn’t






























Resist another try?

Have you ever felt a touch so perfect
You could cry over it

























Because
You know you will never feel anything
More than that
Anytime?

I know those are all the senses
But shouldn’t there
Be more than the 5 core?
One that has a deeper meaning than
Anything before?
One that includes all
But
Excludes nothing more?

What about one that goes…..

Have you ever witnessed the amazement
When the sound of the
Wind

































goes along great
With the temperature of your
Skin
From the brightness of the
Sun
And then you smell like
Salt
From
The ocean































But still taste
Some
Of the treats
Which to your opinion was
Yum
But that was also the
Same with the guy




























from the most perfect
Dreams
And at least your hands were always locked and far away the
Key?

This experience would be the ultimate
Piece
To the overall puzzle of
The 5 senses in the
Scheme































but they would
Seem to
Be
Put all in1

If you added this




























to your list
Of
Feel
See
Taste
Sight
and
Fragrance

You could call it…..

The 6 senses of amazement



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LL&S.PEB GOLD said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 1:00 pm
LL&S.PEB GOLD, Webster Groves, Missouri
19 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Best things in life are unseen, that is why we close our eyes to kiss, cry, and dream.

thank u! :)

on Feb. 26 2010 at 3:34 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

this is so...i dont know! i love the way its scattered down the page. i dont even have words to describe it but i love it. i would give an arm and a leg to write something like this.


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