Forever Regrets

February 14, 2010
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."


Here we stand again, my dear,
Yet you stand over there; away from my side.
Last time we stood, you held my hand.
In the past, you were my guide.

Look over here and catch my eyes,
See the anger and see the pain.
Don’t be afraid of the hurt you’ll feel;
for I’m only playing your game.

Save your breath and don’t deny it,
You remember it better than I.
Although you have tried to erase this mistake,
The memories will never die.

Don’t look at me as if you don’t remember,
There’s no way to forget our past.
I know you remember the rise and fall,
And I’m sure the heartbreak will last.

But I won’t stand here alone, my sweet,
While you think you have it together.
You’ll wish your past wasn’t haunted.
And you’ll regret your lies forever.

The author's comments:
When someone has done something to you that hurts beyond any belief...it's always hard to accept that they're not suffering like you are. Sometimes you can only hope that it will catch up to them in the end.

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on Jan. 6 2013 at 9:45 am
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
32 articles 2 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Wow, this was absolutely breathtaking. Seriously, this gave me the chills. Everything it says is so true, and memories came flooding back to me as a I read it. I love your work. You're an amazing writer. :)

on Nov. 10 2011 at 10:16 pm
BrittneyLynn BRONZE, W. Richland, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One who saves another, has saved the entire world."

Love this poem!

Me and my boyfriend have been going through some rough times and this pretty much sums it up

Great job!


on Sep. 30 2011 at 3:47 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! what a compliment :) i'm sooo glad to hear you enjoy my writing THAT much! it means soo much :) thank you!

on Sep. 30 2011 at 3:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

thank you sooo much! you have no idea how much that means :)

on Sep. 30 2011 at 3:46 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i'm glad you were able to relate to my writing :) thanks soo much for your comment! check out some of my other stuff if you enjoyed it enough!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 12:48 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
70 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

wow.. absolutely..amazing\stunning. love the flow, the word choice, the style you used.. GREAT!

on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:50 pm
Bookwormwriter SILVER, Centerville, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

to any and all, who see this comment, please read, comment, and rate my work!  thanks!

i absolutley loved this one!  because i've been through the same exact thing, i know exactly how well this poem relates to the real thing.  please continue your wonderful bittersweet writing!


on Aug. 5 2010 at 2:15 am
liveforthemoment SILVER, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
we can only learn to love by loving - iris murdoch

love it :) keep writing!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 10:50 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

Great poem which really conveyed emotion

on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:53 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
31 articles 0 photos 144 comments
1st,  want to say thank you for commenting on my work. Means so much to me, so im returning the favor. This is really great, I wish i was in the mood to talk to my ex-best friend so i could show her this...because this piece that is filled with talent, shows how i feel toward her, and everything about the positions she and I are in. Thank you for writing this! Please keep doing so!

on Jul. 10 2010 at 8:42 pm
Love_Kills_the_Blind PLATINUM, Fort Collins, Colorado
23 articles 5 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never regret anything, at one point its exactly what you wanted."

I was blown away! I've read all your work but this is definutly one of my favorites. You are really really talented! How you use words make your feelings known clearly. Keep writing!! I cant wait to read more! :)

on Jun. 28 2010 at 1:47 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you sound really bitter like"hello my dear, i hope you suffer a terrible death, kisses!" actually its like bitter and sugary at the same time, but not bitter-sweet because the balnce dominates that one. very nice catpain. 5 stars.....captain.

on May. 31 2010 at 6:12 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

Wow, this is really good. It feels kind of haunted and spooky with the strained anger in the words. Fantastic job ;)

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on May. 26 2010 at 11:45 am
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
13 articles 6 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

May I say that U are truly the best writer on this site...amazing work

RinnyG. SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 6:18 pm
RinnyG. SILVER, Manhattan, Kansas
5 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm tall enough I can touch the ground!

Once your born, you start to die...

This is such a great piece!  I could totally feel your pain and anger.  nice job, 5 stars!!!

on May. 11 2010 at 4:27 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is nice. you sound bitter in a sweet and delicious way. very nice. 5 stars captain.

on May. 11 2010 at 3:07 pm
AlexandraVasari PLATINUM, Fort Stewart, Georgia
28 articles 4 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing songs is super intimate. It's a bit like getting naked"~ Gwen Stefani

This is also really amazing! Again I love the message! Beautiful job!!! <3

on May. 7 2010 at 7:43 pm
poisionWriter SILVER, Idaho Falls, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think I love you.

omwow. this poem touched my heart.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 3:04 pm
dancerforlifex GOLD, Monson, Massachusetts
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is to give life a meaning.

this poem is so true! its extremely realistic and i know, ive been through the same thing! but i can see that at the last stanza you're becoming stronger. great job! :D

on Apr. 7 2010 at 9:07 am
shelby_kat DIAMOND, Warren, Ohio
72 articles 3 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can sum up everything I've learned about life in three words; it goes on." -Robert Frost

all of your poems are good XD woot!




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