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i wish that you would notice me,
i wish that you would care.
i wish that you would turn around
and realize i was there.
i wish that you would listen, or at least that you could hear,
blood flows from adrenaline
hearts beat in fear.
i wish that you could feel
how it hurt to say goodbye.
you would never laugh again
you would only cry.
i wish that you could smell the tears
upon my salty face.
i wish that you could make me laugh
so there would be no trace.
i wish that you were here for the sensations that you missed
we started with hello
and ended with a kiss.





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Philip_Hart said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 12:40 pm
Very good piece of writing. I enjoyed your work very very much. Your beat is very good as well as your rhyming. Keep up the good work. I guess it's the hardships in life that lead us to write what speaks to all of us the most. Keep it up!
 
cupcake_012 replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 5:33 pm
thank you.
 
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