I can feel you

January 31, 2010
By Toni-Ann GOLD, London, Other
Toni-Ann GOLD, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest

I can feel your heat.
You slip your arms around me.
I know what's about to happen.
You know what's about to happen.
You lean in.
I close my eyes.
Relax, you've done it before.
Wish I could freeze this moment in time.

I can feel your lips against mine.
A passion is realesed.
You hold me tighter.
This is more then a kiss.
This is wonderful.
Sparks fly.

I can feel your eyes on me.
We just shared something.
I hold you for a little bit.
I want this to last longer.
I love this moment.

The author's comments:
The first kiss with someone is just wonderful

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alli..g(: said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 6:39 pm
alli..g(:, Visala, California
0 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love yourself"((:

this is sooper gr8((: i can practically feel what you were feeling...my kneecaps r shaking lyke crazyy((: ahh!!!you have a gr8 way of really capturing the moment((:


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