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Do you see me

January 30, 2010
By Toni-Ann GOLD, London, Other
Toni-Ann GOLD, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest


Tell me what you see when you look at me.
Do you see the smile I give you.
Or do you look deeper?
Can you see the pain in my eyes?
Can you see the joyfulness in my eyes?
Can you see me.


The author's comments:
So my second piece of work in a day ? Ahaha , tell me what you think ?

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on Feb. 13 2010 at 8:04 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Life is hard; but it's harder if you're stupid. -John Wayne

I like this simple poem...is says alot. This is oftem what I ask myself (= If you get the time please check out my opinion essay on animal right/vegetarianism