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Fifteen hundred miles away
I can’t get this pain to go away
I’m just trying to get through the day
Because it’s at night when I see your face
And I start to smile again
Cause it’s at night that I know
You’ll stay with me till I wake up
You’ll stay with me when I mess up
You won’t turn your back on me
You’re the only person I want to be
With tonight
Ohhh, good night (good night)

You say you miss me
But I’m not convinced
You say you love me
But I’m not impressed
It’s more of the same
In this silly little game
We call love
It ends around ten to three, and that is when
I see your face
And I start to smile again
Cause it’s at night that I know
You’ll stay with me till I wake up
You’ll stay with me when I mess up
You won’t turn your back on me
You’re the only person I want to be
With tonight
Ohhh, good night (good night)

The ones line up
I hold my breath
Make another wish that will never come true
All I’m asking for is to hold you



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Asianflowers said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 7:58 pm

interesting. vere interesting. It flows well and the words are artful. Nice. 

Also could you look at some of my work?

 
Milo! said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 4:24 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
JerseyLiar9 replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 5:41 am
Thank you so much! && I will definately check out some of your stuff.
 
Powd3er said...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 2:37 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
 
JerseyLiar9 replied...
Feb. 9, 2010 at 9:06 pm
Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it, and will check out your other stuff! :D
 
krissy775 replied...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 11:02 pm
wow, sorry for all the comments on ur stuff but its all so good and i love ur stuff for many reasons but i LOVE how u rhyme! i cnt for my life!
 
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