I Dare You

January 20, 2010
By *MK*:] BRONZE, Hemet, California
*MK*:] BRONZE, Hemet, California
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Tell me you'll leave
Tell me I wont succeed
Tell me another lie that I'll believe

Make me walk the plank and drown in your disppointment
Make it known to the world, that I'm the greatest failed attempt at perfection

I wont embrace it, but ill accept it
I'm not breathing for you
I'm not dying for you
I wont give into this defeated decit
In this ongoing mutiny- its just you and me

I will win this battle even though i lost the war

Stand there and tell me you'll leave
Look me in the eye and make me believe
I'm telling you right now you wont succeed


The author's comments:
I was inspired by an event in my life. Take this ridcule and make something out of it. Find a way to make the sun shine on a cloudy day. just because someone says you cant doesnt mean you have to listen to them

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on Feb. 9 2010 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


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