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it decides

The old yellow star is in the sky
and its mass covers up my emotion
there are words that describe this lie
but hidden in a deep effected explosion
there are things im going do to
that will defiantly affect this place
maybe if i hug it close to view
what i did, in time will erase
curtsey allows me to fix it once
then it will surely leave me be
a 100 percent fix in just months
time will tell if it will agree

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jonas_chic899 said...
May 12, 2010 at 9:20 pm
lovely:DDDD i liked how u said "and its mass covers up my emotion" i really liked this
jessica.cherish.conner replied...
May 13, 2010 at 9:39 pm
thanks again! ill check out some of your work!
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