it decides

January 8, 2010
By jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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The old yellow star is in the sky
and its mass covers up my emotion
there are words that describe this lie
but hidden in a deep effected explosion
there are things im going do to
that will defiantly affect this place
maybe if i hug it close to view
what i did, in time will erase
curtsey allows me to fix it once
then it will surely leave me be
a 100 percent fix in just months
time will tell if it will agree



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on May. 13 2010 at 9:39 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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thanks again! ill check out some of your work!

on May. 12 2010 at 9:20 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

lovely:DDDD i liked how u said "and its mass covers up my emotion" i really liked this


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