The Carousel

January 6, 2010
By hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching


Its not like I can stop,
I can’t just leave it all behind,
I know I can’t tell anybody,
but I can’t get it off my mind,

I haunts me like a ghost,
hangs over me like a storm,
but somehow you can’t see it,
beneath this act that I perform.

I’m such a hypocrite,
a liar, a horrible friend,
but I’m too scared to tell you,
scared our friendship will end.

We’re going in circles,
my life’s become a carousel,
I want so badly to just get off,
to escape this living hell.



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on Jul. 29 2010 at 3:18 pm
PaolaC. PLATINUM, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
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So true! ;)

Read my work if you get a chance, please.


on Jul. 11 2010 at 12:33 pm
jay_chelle GOLD, Medford, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Our greatest fear is not that we are inadequate but that we are powerful beyond belief."

This is amazing writing! It explains what so many of us go through! Especially me!

 

Keep up the good work!


on Jun. 19 2010 at 7:34 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

Thank you sooo much!

and will do! ;)


on Jun. 18 2010 at 3:16 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was so good !  Don't ever stop  writing :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


on Jun. 15 2010 at 10:25 am
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you so much! and will do! :D

Trisket GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 2:05 am
Trisket GOLD, Ely, Nevada
15 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life Isnt About Waiting For The Storm To Pass,
Its About Learning To Dance In The Rain."

I Really Liked This.. It Was Powerful.

Check Some Of My Pieces Out(:


on May. 28 2010 at 10:12 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

anytime! thanks for the comments on mine! =D

Duckie430 said...
on May. 28 2010 at 8:52 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

thank you soooo much! i really appreciate it. :)

on May. 28 2010 at 8:40 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

done!!! =D

Duckie430 said...
on May. 28 2010 at 8:27 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

you're welcome, I really do love this poem. :)

I was wondering if you could please read my latest poem? It's called Jack and Sally, in the ballad section. I'd really appreciate feedback. :)


on May. 26 2010 at 4:50 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks so much!! =D

Duckie430 said...
on May. 26 2010 at 3:34 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
0 articles 0 photos 229 comments

Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

I liked this poem, especially the carousel as a metaphor.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 8:01 am
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks! =D

on Apr. 25 2010 at 4:58 pm
I LOVE IT!!!!

on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:46 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you so much!!! =D

on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:45 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks. i really appreciate it! =D

on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:45 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

haha thank you soo much!!! =D and im sorry that its the story of your life... =/

on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:44 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks, and same here... but im sorry to hear that. :/

on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:43 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thank you so much!!! :D

on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:43 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

thanks so much! =D


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