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Closure

October 13, 2009
By Anonymous

come into my universe of love
watch the moon and stars above
all i really want is you
let me show you what i feel
my desire for you is real
all i really need is you

i take you to a place
a place where we can hide
it's dark and warm
you'll like it here my dear
we take your clothes off
i wanna touch your skin
i hold your body close
i look into your eyes

i feel you very near
your heart beats like drum
i feel your lips on mine
and than you close your eyes
i take out my knife
but you can't feel the steel
and than your feel it too
my love for you is real...


The author's comments:
Love.

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on Jul. 27 2011 at 1:13 pm
EnigmaticBeing PLATINUM, Santa Barbara, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Be careful what you set your heart upon - for it will surely be yours.'
James A. Baldwin

I'm speechless. I have no words to decribe how much I love and can relate to this poem.

on Feb. 23 2011 at 4:47 pm
White.Roses DIAMOND, West Chester, Ohio
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I looove this poem. Amazing job.