The Sun's Swansong

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The sky bleeds colour,
In the sun's swansong
In the starry abyys,
It waits to be reborn

The birds rest in the darkness
The wind whistles among the trees
Black's colourless blanket
Unites the earth in peace

Dreams float in the night sky
But the sun comes to life
Turning reality to fantasy
Blurry reminicises of triumph and strife

The Earth bursts into energy
The Fiery Sun burns the darkness
A beautiful unending blue sky
The sun it shines so vivid and harmless





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Imagination said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 5:49 am
i love the imagery that you used, it really speaks to the reader. good work!!  =)
 
munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 6:22 pm
thanks! Nice of you to say
 
Amanda N. said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 8:08 pm
Nice word choice! Very pretty poem. :)
 
munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 12:06 pm
thank you :)
 
dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 6:17 pm
beautiful. i love how vividly you described everything; i can almost imagine everything happening. i like the night and day comparisions too; very creative :) all around a great poem! would you mind commenting on some of my work, id love your feedback. keep writing too, i really enjoyed this piece! :)
 
munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 3:23 pm
thank you :)
 
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