The Sun's Swansong

October 31, 2009
By munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan


The sky bleeds colour,
In the sun's swansong
In the starry abyys,
It waits to be reborn

The birds rest in the darkness
The wind whistles among the trees
Black's colourless blanket
Unites the earth in peace

Dreams float in the night sky
But the sun comes to life
Turning reality to fantasy
Blurry reminicises of triumph and strife

The Earth bursts into energy
The Fiery Sun burns the darkness
A beautiful unending blue sky
The sun it shines so vivid and harmless


The author's comments:
A poem about something that has always captivated me, night and day. I worked particularly hard on this piece

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on Apr. 16 2010 at 6:22 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

thanks! Nice of you to say

on Apr. 16 2010 at 5:49 am
Katherine93 GOLD, Liverpool, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"the only person you are destined to become is the person that you choose to be" - unknown

i love the imagery that you used, it really speaks to the reader. good work!!  =)

on Dec. 9 2009 at 12:06 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

thank you :)

Mandilee GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 8:08 pm
Mandilee GOLD, Sierra Madre, California
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Nice word choice! Very pretty poem. :)

on Dec. 6 2009 at 3:23 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
18 articles 1 photo 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

thank you :)

on Nov. 27 2009 at 6:17 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

beautiful. i love how vividly you described everything; i can almost imagine everything happening. i like the night and day comparisions too; very creative :) all around a great poem! would you mind commenting on some of my work, id love your feedback. keep writing too, i really enjoyed this piece! :)


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