October 27, 2009
By cheer_mhs BRONZE, Manhattan, Kansas
cheer_mhs BRONZE, Manhattan, Kansas
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Here you are,
Standing beside me,
Love has never tasted so sweet,
So pure.
My heart opens wide,
I’m ready to give in,
You close your eyes,
I place a flower in your hand,
One by one, the petals fall.
It seems as if nothing is left,
Of the love we once shared.
You throw the flower to the ground,
My heart shatters into a million pieces,
I can’t let you see me like this,
My fragile state.
How can you do this,
I thought you cared,
I’m done with this,
The love we once shared.

The author's comments:
This is based upon an experience of mine. The flower i put into his hand represents my trust i gave to him.

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on Nov. 13 2009 at 9:08 pm
LostInConfusion BRONZE, Texarkana, Texas
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Wow. This is really amazing. I feel the exact same way.


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