My Marvin

October 21, 2009
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I need you in my life,
more than you will ever know. You've given me a love-
a love, I pray, will grow.

Your smile gives me hope
for a life of happiness.
Just wrap your arms around me, that's when I truly feel blessed.

The way your lips caress me,
with compassion and desire,
fills my heart with joy
and lights my soul with fire.
I’ll love you with all I have
and NEVER any less.
That’s my promise to you:
to give you my very best.

I love you Marvin.

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Grania This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 9:29 am
This is really nice. Keep writing, you have a spark for it!
ConnerH replied...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 9:39 pm
I love your style :)
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 5:51 pm
wow. i read this before reading your comments about the article and i never would have guessed that you are a beginning poet :) this is a great piece! it has nice rhythm and flow to it, and you wrote about things very sweet to you; i can almost feel the emotion :) overall it's a great piece. check out some of my work if you ever need any help (you could saw im a veteran writer) :D good luck with your writing, im looking forward to more of your work :)
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