Every little detail

October 6, 2009
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Every little detail
comes to mind so clear
every word you've said to me
is whirring in my ear.
All those little heartbreaks
All the times we spent
is prominent inside my mind.
I wonder where you went.
It used to be so easy
but now I know It's lies
So I will be indifferent
as we say our goodbyes.

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Peanut:) said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 4:55 pm
I quite agree, and it flows fantastically, not to long and not to short.
caughtinaxm0ment said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 11:18 pm
i love the simplicity of this. it's easily relatable. and it puts a fresh-twist on an overused, and commonly cliche topic.
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 2:52 pm
thank you!
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