Carloyn, need love? Take mine.

April 6, 2009
By Breakeven BRONZE, Edinburgh, Other
Breakeven BRONZE, Edinburgh, Other
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Love is a demon
Love is a poison
It has no slayer
Nor cure but a flee
Which only riddles you in mystery
Smothers you in pains
And drowns you again and again and again.
Although I hold it not brave
If this is what you crave -
To trade my soul for yours
Then forever I'll be thankful.

The author's comments:
A response to the popular poem 'Need love?'.

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on Apr. 17 2009 at 2:55 am
Toxic_Wasteland PLATINUM, Andowver, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life... It Goes On."~Robet Frost

wow this is really good and i love the pic its a girla dn a rose thats so cool


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