Numbers

2.Go ahead
3.Underestimate my intelligence
4. It's okay with me
5. I rather enjoy dark surprises
4. They bring me joy
3. You chuckle now
2. Just wait <3





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Elana F. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2009 at 2:20 am
its cool cuz u can sorta follow the story line (or make up ur own) even though u wrote so few words.

feel free to chek out my poetry.
 
RheaD.Ravenfinger This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2009 at 2:48 pm
I agree with Mikal and EdytD on pretty much everything they said. It would have alot more interest if you made it longer or you could have written it as all of the things you enjoy doing or hate doing or scare of. There is so much you can do with this. I love the idea though.
 
Mikal said...
Apr. 24, 2009 at 11:40 pm
I agree with EdytD, but I think u should make the lenght of the poem longer
 
EdytD said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 9:24 pm
I'm not sure about the numbers, but there's something interesting about it - it seems like you wrote it in anger and indignation - at least, that's my view.

I'd love if you took a look at my poetry. Thanks!
 
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