Numbers

April 3, 2009
By Green_Eyed_Irish PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
Green_Eyed_Irish PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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2.Go ahead
3.Underestimate my intelligence
4. It's okay with me
5. I rather enjoy dark surprises
4. They bring me joy
3. You chuckle now
2. Just wait <3



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on Jun. 1 2009 at 2:20 am
soccerpsycho49 PLATINUM, Teaneck, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Those who say that sunshine is happiness have never danced in the rain.

its cool cuz u can sorta follow the story line (or make up ur own) even though u wrote so few words.



feel free to chek out my poetry.

on May. 12 2009 at 2:48 pm
RheaD.Ravenfinger BRONZE, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:4-8

I agree with Mikal and EdytD on pretty much everything they said. It would have alot more interest if you made it longer or you could have written it as all of the things you enjoy doing or hate doing or scare of. There is so much you can do with this. I love the idea though.

Mikal SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 11:40 pm
Mikal SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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I agree with EdytD, but I think u should make the lenght of the poem longer

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 9:24 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I'm not sure about the numbers, but there's something interesting about it - it seems like you wrote it in anger and indignation - at least, that's my view.



I'd love if you took a look at my poetry. Thanks!




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