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What's wrong with haikus?
They do not always make sense
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 12:05 pm:

If you are implying that haikus don't make sense, then I believe you. I think your piece is a good demonstration to that. But some of the haikus that you think don't make sense, probably do. It just takes a while to understand. Keep writing. You have talent.

And please check out my work.

Ratings are greatly appreciated.

 
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Ranebuggy said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 11:12 pm:
"It is very advanced."
 
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Undiscovered said...
Apr. 15, 2009 at 1:03 am:
wow that is amazing...
 
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