Leave Her Be

February 19, 2018
By Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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It's in her bones;

You can't take her away.

It's in her heart;

To show you the way.

It's in her blood;

For thousands of years.

Don't take her away after all these tears.

 

No fancy ring;

Will make her leave;

You can't just bring;

A thread and tell her to weave.



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on Jun. 14 at 11:48 am
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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@Samster02 Thank you for reading this poem! I would be happy to read your work!

on Jun. 9 at 1:38 pm
Samster02 BRONZE, Pittsburg, Texas
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I like the rhythm of the poem. Do you mind reading mine and telling me what you think?

on May. 2 at 7:10 pm
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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Thank you for reading this!

on May. 2 at 4:34 pm
Imagin8er BRONZE, Chippewa Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Be peaceful, be courteous, obey the law; but if someone puts a hand on you, send him to the cemetery." - Malcolm X

Hello, you wanted me to give feedback, so here you go... IDK why, but I like the shortness too. It has a good message, and it's not dramatic or flowery. I can't find anything bad about it. I replied to your comment on Broken Record, if you want to check that out too.

on Apr. 23 at 12:24 pm
Summer_R_Quinn GOLD, Madison, South Dakota
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Thank you!

on Apr. 22 at 6:45 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 PLATINUM, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@Summer_R_Quinn Great poem. So sweet and short. Indeed this poem's a gift.


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