April 2, 2009
Destroying from all angles
I wish i could ease his pain.
But it only gets worse.
when comes the point
that life loses its value?
Life in so much pain is not a life at all.

He is losing the will to live.
Who can blame him?
It is pure selfishness to
force him to endure this suffering
any longer.
I would rather that he go

I'd give anything
for him to have even one minute
without pain.

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xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:45 pm
wow. really deep. u can really feel the emotion. awwesome job :))
MayaElyashiv This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 9:37 am
this really reminds me of Elphaba and Fiyero from Wicked The Musical...
could you take a look at some of my poems? I'd really appreciate your input.
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