Surrender

April 2, 2009
By xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Take me away
Off into the sweet black night.
Take me somewhere far from here,
Where no one can ever find me.
Wrap me up in your smooth black silk,
Take me out of here with your soft sweet kiss.
Take away my saddness,
And soothe all my pain.
Help me dissapear from here,
To a place very far away.
Make me hear the sound of silence,
And feel completly weightless.
Take away all the hate I have,
And the rage I feel inside.
Take me to a cold dark place
That no one knows of but me.



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on Feb. 7 2010 at 8:39 pm
.Santana. BRONZE, Payette, Idaho
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I love it! This poem is absolutely amazing.

on Apr. 14 2009 at 11:10 pm
brigeisfalling GOLD, San Juan Capistrano, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Never be bullied into silence. Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself." ~Harvey Fierstein

"Never forget how beautiful you are" ~Gerard Way

So yeah I don't like Twilight and I won't rant why I don't like it. Let's just say the series is just one big metaphor that I don't agree with. Thanks so much for commenting on my poems. The comments have made my day! I posted up new work that will also be up online soon! Have a great day!

on Apr. 13 2009 at 3:37 am
brigeisfalling GOLD, San Juan Capistrano, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Never be bullied into silence. Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself." ~Harvey Fierstein

"Never forget how beautiful you are" ~Gerard Way

WOW! To me it has a sort of vampire feel to it. It might just be me but I can totally see the independence written in the poem!

on Apr. 12 2009 at 9:47 pm
Author_ConstantineSeries GOLD, Richmond, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
“Reading without thinking is nothing, for a book is less important for what it says than for what it makes you think.”

this is so good...your writing is inspirational :) all of them are. kep writing it's your talent ;)


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