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Surrender

Take me away
Off into the sweet black night.
Take me somewhere far from here,
Where no one can ever find me.
Wrap me up in your smooth black silk,
Take me out of here with your soft sweet kiss.
Take away my saddness,
And soothe all my pain.
Help me dissapear from here,
To a place very far away.
Make me hear the sound of silence,
And feel completly weightless.
Take away all the hate I have,
And the rage I feel inside.
Take me to a cold dark place
That no one knows of but me.



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.Santana. said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 8:39 pm:
I love it! This poem is absolutely amazing.
 
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Briisfalling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2009 at 3:37 am:
WOW! To me it has a sort of vampire feel to it. It might just be me but I can totally see the independence written in the poem!
 
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innergenious745 said...
Apr. 12, 2009 at 9:47 pm:
this is so good...your writing is inspirational :) all of them are. kep writing it's your talent ;)
 
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Briisfalling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2009 at 11:10 pm:
So yeah I don't like Twilight and I won't rant why I don't like it. Let's just say the series is just one big metaphor that I don't agree with. Thanks so much for commenting on my poems. The comments have made my day! I posted up new work that will also be up online soon! Have a great day!
 
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