March 25, 2009
By .Misted.Ma SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
.Misted.Ma SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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With my life far gone,
Blood running down my fingertips,
My soul cries out.

Redeem me for my past mistakes,
Take away all the pain,
Condemn my guilt.


Facing the past,
Fighting the present,
Killing the future.

One slip,
I’m done,
Gone far away.

Crying for a savior,
Screaming for judgment,
Grieving for repentance.

Hiding from everyone,
Blaming only me,
Dying in silence.

Save me…

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on Apr. 23 2009 at 12:39 am
Mika_Lestat PLATINUM, Shinnston, West Virginia
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Okay, your really good. My poems are a lot like yours, in a sense.

on Apr. 16 2009 at 5:25 pm
xXTearxStainedXx BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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I nameded it! ^_^

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