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Perverseness in the Insomniac

Left to the mercy
Of definitively perverse thought
Deciding whether one should act
For the reason one should not
The silence bearing a terrarium
For every breed of wrought destruction
In a dusty jar upon the shelf
Adjacent to production
An intellectually formed morality
Subtly tainted with carnal compulsion
It drives the epitome of sophistry
Into animalistic consumption
As one descends into convulsion
Of each enticing vital function





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writerscramp said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 6:05 pm
With you 100% Joanna.
Fangz, wow. You are amazing.
Thank you so much for posting on my pathetic "work". So many people post shallow things like omg me too!
and such. Please, (I never ever ever thought I'd say this) but please give me more critizism, and tips.
I think the first one should be i need go go out and buy a dictionary, because i can't spell if my life depended on it.
Lol. Thanks, and your amazing!
 
Joanna said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 5:24 pm
Oh my.
I've read many of your poems. They are... marvelous. I never know what to say after I read them, everything I write seems graceless and ignorant in comparison.
If you published a collection of your poems, I would read it.
 
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