memory poem

October 2, 2017
By poydras BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
poydras BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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Its what I am and show you the work I put in                             Could not have done it without my supporters       It was not easy as anyone says         Some people take winning for garneted I don’t                    Some people can have whatever they want        Not everybody is the best at something tho        I’m a winner                         I hate losing more than I like winning         I was a role model for my students         I got in trouble  once but not again          I disrespected my couch and hurt my pride        Not again that was weak not another repeat                     sometimes I think about what we could have done       My team I mean a dream I had, not the meme I saw       Its bull regret yes always every time I see it         when I see it it brings back the past                       I will win it all someday I swore          I will redeem myself just listen         I will but everyone is wearing headphones no ones listening     then watch me                        Actions speaks louder than words you heard or you see      see… see… see I told you prove them wrong        prove them wrong still no respect         alright bow down and pray I don’t get any better.                                                       Its what I am and show you the work I put in                             Could not have done it without my supporters       It was not easy as anyone says         Some people take winning for garneted I don’t                    Some people can have whatever they want        Not everybody is the best at something tho        I’m a winner                         I hate losing more than I like winning         I was a role model for my students         I got in trouble  once but not again          I disrespected my couch and hurt my pride        Not again that was weak not another repeat                     sometimes I think about what we could have done       My team I mean a dream I had, not the meme I saw       Its bull regret yes always every time I see it         when I see it it brings back the past                       I will win it all someday I swore          I will redeem myself just listen         I will but everyone is wearing headphones no ones listening     then watch me                        Actions speaks louder than words you heard or you see      see… see… see I told you prove them wrong        prove them wrong still no respect         alright bow down and pray I don’t get any better.                                                               Its what I am and show you the work I put in                             Could not have done it without my supporters       It was not easy as anyone says         Some people take winning for garneted I don’t                    Some people can have whatever they want        Not everybody is the best at something tho        I’m a winner                         I hate losing more than I like winning         I was a role model for my students         I got in trouble  once but not again          I disrespected my couch and hurt my pride        Not again that was weak not another repeat                     sometimes I think about what we could have done       My team I mean a dream I had, not the meme I saw       Its bull regret yes always every time I see it         when I see it it brings back the past                       I will win it all someday I swore          I will redeem myself just listen         I will but everyone is wearing headphones no ones listening     then watch me                        Actions speaks louder than words you heard or you see      see… see… see I told you prove them wrong        prove them wrong still no respect         alright bow down and pray I don’t get any better.                                                                                       


The author's comments:

The strategies I used while making my poem was using something that I had  deep inside of me like a passion for example. I used the passion of people telling me what I can’t do and losing.  The two writer device I used is personification and rhyme a little bit.  I cant say I see myself as a poet. I’m not saying that because I’m not good at it I’m saying it because its fun to do but its something I would not do at the same time  


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