Life's Candle

March 24, 2009
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fire burning

watching

the candle melt

wax drips down the side

sweet aroma

rose fills the room

after minutes

we're left with

a puddle of wax

and a dead

flame





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Duckie430 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 3, 2009 at 1:07 pm
good imagery, interesting concept
very good
 
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