Life's Candle

March 24, 2009
By Redwolf SILVER, Casselberry, Florida
Redwolf SILVER, Casselberry, Florida
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fire burning

watching

the candle melt

wax drips down the side

sweet aroma

rose fills the room

after minutes

we're left with

a puddle of wax

and a dead

flame


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Duckie430 said...
on Apr. 3 2009 at 1:07 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

good imagery, interesting concept

very good


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