Mr. Romantic

March 22, 2009
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I came to your locker
With my chocolate and rose
I ask you to be my girl friend
And you know how it goes

So you get excited
And start jumping around
I tell you I want 3.50 for the chocolates
And then you start kicking me down

So I say sorry
“how about we go eat
Lets go to mcdonald
There you can feast”

So I take you to mcdonald
Letting u ride my bike
“here is the dollar menu
You can chose anything you like

You get a sandwich
And I get some fries
And the bill came to two dollars
so I start to cry

“dam that’s a lot of money
I am definetly not going to pay
So take out your wallet
You will pay the bill today”

You start to cry
And then you run away
So I stop you and tell you
Listen I have something to say

I can’t bare to see u cry
You have bewitched me
Mind body soul for I love you
That love sends me soaring through eternity

Oh romio that’s the sweetest thing ever
You’re the best, I love you
Wow who knew the stuff from movies works
Wahooooo!





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ahmed said...
Apr. 6, 2009 at 8:00 pm
IF ANY ONE WANTS TO READ A ROMANTIC POEM GO TO MY OTHER POEMS

READ - RATE - REVIEW
 
Persianprince11 said...
Apr. 5, 2009 at 6:37 am
Very good attempt at modern poetry although Shakespeare will have a headache with the dollar menu, the content and message shows your artistic skills.
Now, just imagine this:
The first time I saw you, my heart leaped from my chest.
My heart sought compassion and security but you crushed it by your past bad experiences.
Time and time again I have courted thee, thine mind overshadows the truth.
Neither lust nor obsession lurks around the mind.
Neither rhyme nor... (more »)
 
isha93 said...
Apr. 4, 2009 at 1:26 am
lmao thats a HILARIOUS poem :D
 
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