You Said I Couldn't

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You said I couldn't cry,

you said to hold it in,

you said my wrongful eyes,

should never have to win,

that the voices I heard,

shouldn't control my thoughts,

they were absurd,

they said what I was not,

yet I cried inside,

tears fell in my emotions,

my hope drowned at night,

to not cause commotions,

I feared to appear weak,

I strived to be strong,

yet the tears at my feet,

showed that I was wrong,

my lonesome ideas,

puddled on the floor,

along forgotten retinas,

that can't cry anymore,

now I'm stuck in memories,

replaying how I hurt,

yet remembering,

has caused my thoughts to blurt,

I'm frozen in my mind,

confused by how I feel,

I don't know what to find,

because I don't know what is real.

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Cory_Clark said...
Jul. 4 at 4:01 pm
I love the line along forgotten retinas that can't cry anymore
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Jul. 12 at 1:06 pm
Thank you.
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