Give me Love

March 19, 2009
By IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.


The pain keeps eating
Eating me away
Night after night
Day after day

I can’t take it
The screaming inside
I have no way to cope
It hurts not to cry

I see no future
Just disappointment one after another
I see no happiness
I can’t pull myself together

Please love me
Give me my spirit
Give me my peace
I hope you will hear it



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Shannon_ GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 4:43 pm
Shannon_ GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
For we are the children of The Lost Generation and Truth is blind.

Awesome i really liked it.. keep it up... thanks for the comment on my poem Quiet Smiles!

on Apr. 6 2009 at 11:54 pm
RainWashed PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
46 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Repeat the good and the bad. Do it all again. And pile on the years."

That was good. I could kinda feel what you were trying to send the reader. It was depressing. You should read some of my other stuff that is way better than the nine year old piercing opinion. I've read some of your other stuff like my evil best friend.


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