Give me Love

March 19, 2009
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The pain keeps eating
Eating me away
Night after night
Day after day

I can’t take it
The screaming inside
I have no way to cope
It hurts not to cry

I see no future
Just disappointment one after another
I see no happiness
I can’t pull myself together

Please love me
Give me my spirit
Give me my peace
I hope you will hear it

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Shannon_McCauley said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 4:43 pm
Awesome i really liked it.. keep it up... thanks for the comment on my poem Quiet Smiles!
Linklover95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2009 at 11:54 pm
That was good. I could kinda feel what you were trying to send the reader. It was depressing. You should read some of my other stuff that is way better than the nine year old piercing opinion. I've read some of your other stuff like my evil best friend.
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