May 15, 2017
By jacob13 BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
jacob13 BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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With my feelings so hurt I cannot live
I wish I could not live or have a life
Because I am so hurt I cannot think
When your hurt your  feelings aren't very well
And your head is not thinking very straight
I wish that I wasn't so mad at others
So I'm not really mad at myself
Wish I could be so very happy
I wish I could be so very loving
If only any others loved me too.
If anyone can reach out and love me
I will be as happy as anyone
I will be happy like a happy song
Now this will be my very happy life

The author's comments:

this is about how i feel about my life

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Cellist said...
on May. 24 2017 at 5:56 pm
This is a very raw piece of writing....shows true and raw emotions....can't believe someone was brave enough to write about how they were truly feeling.


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