This Can be Anywhere

March 19, 2009
By YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making plans.


Music playing in the distance
Barely heard, just there


Sound of pattering rain
Tapping gently at my windowpane

Sunlight creeping in
At the window

the smell of flowers comes in
brightens the room, lightens my heart

which till now was burdened – And the
music still is playing


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on Aug. 18 2009 at 12:04 am
YeseniaG SILVER, Livonia, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making plans.

thanks for all your comments i really appreciate all the feedback

on Aug. 6 2009 at 2:32 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow really good job. it lets the reader's imagination do all sorts of different things, but the poem structure is still there so great job :) i think the title is very fitting! check out some of my work and comment your feedback would be great :) keep writing!!

on Jul. 12 2009 at 8:36 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

It has great imagery overall

on May. 15 2009 at 5:48 pm
Kdostie2010 BRONZE, Burnham, Maine
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments
This was awesome.

I to find this feeling in music. It always lifts me up.



Great Job.

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 10:25 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 258 comments
I liked it! the simple beauty of nature and music can often lift one's spirit. good job!


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