This Can be Anywhere

March 19, 2009
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Music playing in the distance
Barely heard, just there

Sound of pattering rain
Tapping gently at my windowpane

Sunlight creeping in
At the window

the smell of flowers comes in
brightens the room, lightens my heart

which till now was burdened – And the
music still is playing

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YeseniaG said...
Aug. 18, 2009 at 12:04 am
thanks for all your comments i really appreciate all the feedback
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 2:32 am
wow really good job. it lets the reader's imagination do all sorts of different things, but the poem structure is still there so great job :) i think the title is very fitting! check out some of my work and comment your feedback would be great :) keep writing!!
annkaykay2011 said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 8:36 am
It has great imagery overall
Katie D. said...
May 15, 2009 at 5:48 pm
This was awesome.
I to find this feeling in music. It always lifts me up.

Great Job.
EdytD said...
Apr. 23, 2009 at 10:25 pm
I liked it! the simple beauty of nature and music can often lift one's spirit. good job!
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