May 8, 2017
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When we speak, the words we say

have an impact that will stay;

they have a cost that we all pay,

but oftentimes those words betray

our future thoughts and decisions,

they contrast our ideal visions

causing gaps, vast divisions

leaving thirst for revisions

of the past's final verdict

whose guidelines strongly contradict

with decisions, far too strict,

now giving birth to new conflict.


Goodbye has a distinct meaning,

however, now I'm intervening.

I wish to simply make amends,

to bury the hatchet, to disregard past,

to make the sea of hate less vast

with potential of reborn friends.

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A_Fellow_Writer said...
May 11 at 10:23 am
Hey, awesome poem! Really good message behind it. I was wondering if perhaps you could read my story Heil Führer! Would like some feedback.
Patrick82432This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 11 at 11:10 am
Thank you! Also, I'll check it out :)
A_Fellow_Writer replied...
May 12 at 8:58 am
Yeah, I meant it when I said I liked the poem. Didn't say it just because I wanted you to read my story. Thanks for finding the time to read it.
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