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Ghosts capture
Rupture
Sever my thoughts
Clouding
Forceful doubting
Becoming what I'm not
They enter and exit
Whispering a mass
Of empty promises
Ghosts capture
Rupture
Sever my thoughts
Clouding
Surrounding
The present
Forgot
As the past comes
I run
The night breaks
Here comes the dawn
Ghosts darken me
With blades of hate

Lies
Inside the mind
Weary of nothing
But what was
Left behind
Truth
Unknown
Out my heart's window

My ghosts have captured
Ruptured
Severed my thoughts
Here I am
I am something
I'm not





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elfiewrites said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:10 pm
Wow! This is excellent, but a bit frightening! Keep on writing! And, if you get the chance, may you PLEASE comment on my work too? I would greatly appreciate it! Thanks so much
 
kiwi12 said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 8:13 pm
I definitely like this. The words, the flow, the sound... it's awesome.
I'm sorry about what it means though. :/
 
Dream_Night replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 8:17 pm
Tht's alright! It was a good poem. :)
 
DreamNight replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 8:18 pm
Thanks! :) ITs alright.
 
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