March 17, 2009
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Hope flies hope dies
hope brings tears to my eyes.

Hope that you hadn't died
hope that you were still alive.

Tears fell from my eyes
when your death was realized.

You are dead it is true,
on that day you had no clue.

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project827 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 10:58 am
this is excellent. there's so much meaning behind it too. very nicely done.
Alaira said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 10:09 pm
It's very well written, short, but full of a lot of feeling. I love your first stanza "Hope Flies hope dies; hope brings tears to my eyes."
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