Hope

March 17, 2009
By ryerye626 PLATINUM, Port Washington, Wisconsin
ryerye626 PLATINUM, Port Washington, Wisconsin
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Hope flies hope dies
hope brings tears to my eyes.

Hope that you hadn't died
hope that you were still alive.

Tears fell from my eyes
when your death was realized.

You are dead it is true,
on that day you had no clue.


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on Mar. 31 2009 at 10:58 am
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

this is excellent. there's so much meaning behind it too. very nicely done.

on Mar. 30 2009 at 10:09 pm
Estelle_Star SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I love writing. I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emtions," James A. Michener.

It's very well written, short, but full of a lot of feeling. I love your first stanza "Hope Flies hope dies; hope brings tears to my eyes."




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