You and I

March 17, 2009
By tequila stone BRONZE, Brockton, Massachusetts
tequila stone BRONZE, Brockton, Massachusetts
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you loved me , yet you betrayed me
kissed me but hated me
you laughed when I cried
and angered when I talked
my love burns, my hands tire
from rubbing a scratched surface
you said wow and I said what
you said whateva and I screamed I don't care
you tore me apart but I stayed
I trusted you , you questioned me
I told you how I left

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This article has 2 comments.

on Mar. 31 2009 at 8:24 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

very good writing. it's so full of emotion, and its got enough dark elements that I love it. keep up your good work.

on Mar. 30 2009 at 2:15 pm
trangh_64 PLATINUM, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter how sad or mad I am, deep down in my heart, my only wish is for you to be happy." -Trang

This poem is really good!!!! I love it. Hope you would keep writing.


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