You and I

March 17, 2009
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you loved me , yet you betrayed me
kissed me but hated me
you laughed when I cried
and angered when I talked
my love burns, my hands tire
from rubbing a scratched surface
you said wow and I said what
you said whateva and I screamed I don't care
you tore me apart but I stayed
I trusted you , you questioned me
I told you how I left

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project827 said...
Mar. 31, 2009 at 8:24 pm
very good writing. it's so full of emotion, and its got enough dark elements that I love it. keep up your good work.
trang_orange This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 30, 2009 at 2:15 pm
This poem is really good!!!! I love it. Hope you would keep writing.
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