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A Ravine Moment

A Ravine Moment

We walked hand in hand
Under the night sky
The light of the moon
Reflecting in your eyes.

The ravine was quite
And we laid side by side
Your arms were close around me
And I just couldn't hide'
That I was falling for you.

And that even if you fell
I'd still be by your side
I could just tell.

As we walked back
It started to pour
We were soaking wet and cold
But your lips were so warm.

This moment was beautiful in every way
And it was in this moment I knew
In your arms I wanted to stay.





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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 2:39 pm
i love this one its a beautiful description of teenage romance
 
Inkspired said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 3:14 pm
Beautiful! You wrote this really well, and it just flows. Love it.
 
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