Look at Me

March 12, 2009
By PoeticTwirler PLATINUM, Wantagh, New York
PoeticTwirler PLATINUM, Wantagh, New York
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Favorite Quote:
" If I has to chose between loving you and breathing , I would use my last breath to say I love you...."


Take a look at me
tell me what you see
look at me
please help me

look
can't you see
the help i need
to get me changed

i am gone
with no thought of ever coming back
to the life
i don't want to live

take a good look at me
can't you tell i'm not going back
look at me
help me

the people i saw
the sights witnessed
the places i went
the scents i smelled

all make me
never thinking of there
to the place which
holds no disire for me

now i am here
the here that i want
not there
where i am wanted

take a look at me
now that i am here
the here i chose
i feel free

look at me
can't you tell
the free is new
that it is here i want

take a look at me
i need no help not now
i have a smile
upon the face that didn't

look at me
i am here
i am not
there again

Just take a good look at ME


The author's comments:
this was writen by me of course. i wanted it to be sad but happy all at once if you know what i mean. so i hope you like it.

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