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Forbidden Love

March 11, 2009
By Elizabeth Goff BRONZE, Krum, Texas
Elizabeth Goff BRONZE, Krum, Texas
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Forbidden Love let push go to shove and let no one take that away, He was handsome, faithful,and hilarious. I was the Sun and he was the Moon, we were like fire and ice not meant to be together but somehow were. For now this is Forbidden Love.

The author's comments:
I was inspired by my dad even though he is no longer here, ( died in 2004 ) he will always be in my heart and ever since I have been writing poetry

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on Mar. 27 2009 at 8:56 pm
Elizabeth Goff BRONZE, Krum, Texas
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Thanks you guysa! :)

Soso said...
on Mar. 27 2009 at 12:16 pm
You have a great talent Lizzie, dont waste it no matter what.

I think you did a good job

- soso

Lizzie said...
on Mar. 26 2009 at 8:40 pm
Yes i made it thanks

Keerthi said...
on Mar. 26 2009 at 12:33 am
Nice poem. Did you make it? It is very sad about your dad.

MerlinJohn said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 10:18 pm
I like this poem! Lizzie good job! Its very sad about your dad.