Are We Working

March 11, 2009
By mmodeusher GOLD, Shreveport, Louisiana
mmodeusher GOLD, Shreveport, Louisiana
12 articles 2 photos 11 comments

What am I looking for,
To say,
To teach,
To learn,

Saying it over and over,
But still remaining cold,

Patience, I have,
Do I really have patience?

Persistant I am,
A problem and a blessing.

I wonder if I'm right,
Could I be wrong?

Stuck on you,
My love song,
Song from the heart,
My heart, it sings!

I'm looking for you,
Will you find me?



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on Nov. 4 2009 at 8:56 am
mmodeusher GOLD, Shreveport, Louisiana
12 articles 2 photos 11 comments
Can't find it

on May. 28 2009 at 5:30 pm
mmodeusher GOLD, Shreveport, Louisiana
12 articles 2 photos 11 comments
I can't find it

on Apr. 21 2009 at 10:07 pm
lonelylife711 SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
6 articles 1 photo 16 comments
OHMYGOD!!!!!! that was deep. i'm in awe of you. will you critique my work please? it's called "the invisible circle" (by anonymous, in MI)




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