You Do More

March 14, 2009
By WritingBroken BRONZE, Hattiesburg, Mississippi
WritingBroken BRONZE, Hattiesburg, Mississippi
4 articles 1 photo 2 comments

You make me smile when I'm down
You turn my world all around
You make my life worth living every singl day

But do you see

You make me laugh You make me cry
OH I feel like reaching for the sky
You make me sing You make me scream
I wouldn't trade these feelings for anything

So do you see you do so much more to me

You pick me up when I fall
You help me out when I call
You're always here even when I am wrong

But do you see Oh don't you see

You hepl me out You team with me
Could this be happening to me
You call me up You talk to me
Things a going so perfectly

so do you see you do more

I would give anyhing in this old world just to help you see you do so much more

You make me laugh You make me cry
OH I feel like reaching for the sky
You make me sing You make me scream
I wouldn't trade these feelings for anything
OHHH
You help me out You team with me
Could this be happening to me
You call me up You talk to me
And millions of other things

So do you see Oh but do you see you do much more to me



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on Mar. 17 2009 at 8:13 pm
WritingBroken BRONZE, Hattiesburg, Mississippi
4 articles 1 photo 2 comments
Well give me some credit....I was 12 at the time I wrote it and it's 3 and half years later.

on Mar. 17 2009 at 3:08 pm
Riley Hart SILVER, Berrien Center, Michigan
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It was alright. I liked it, but I think you could have written it better. =D


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