Do You Know???

March 5, 2009
By Heylola2 SILVER, Waterford, Michigan
Heylola2 SILVER, Waterford, Michigan
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i know myself,
But do you know you,
My eyes r closed,
but my heart is open,
i see ur face,
but u aren't really there,
u know its true,
as long as i'm with u,

I knew myself,
'till u came around
now i'm lost in space,
not knowin' where to go

i saw your shadow,
but u didn't see mine,
your heart is true,
but not from my point of view,

you want me to be free,
But i'm stuck here with you
Someone please help me


The author's comments:
i wrote this as a song... but its a nice poem, too... Right?

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on May. 13 2009 at 8:40 pm
Heylola2 SILVER, Waterford, Michigan
8 articles 1 photo 5 comments
thanks!

on Mar. 18 2009 at 5:22 am
mang9believe GOLD, Rigby, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
“You were smitten with me. You were speechless to behold my beauty. You had never met anyone so fascinating. You thought of me every waking minute. You dreamed about me. You couldn’t stand it. You couldn’t let such wonderfulness out of your sight" SC

yes, it is very good poem too ;D


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