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134 Words That Made No Difference
March 5, 2009
You're a whisper in August
Or an echo lost in thought
You faded before September
And obviously you forgot
I'm still alone in darkness
And this light is still so dim
Now we're inside November
And our friendship has gone slim
When day ends, yes I miss you
Yet that won't change one thing
And before this day hits night soon
I already feel that sting
Life calls it a moment
My mind did also to
And yet you were only temporary
Lost in the full moon
And now I lay here coping
Because that's all I can do
Memories of all the good times
Are all that's left of you
And yes I still miss you
But that wont change one thing
And you remind me of last year
When I lost everything.
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AshliCallison PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2009 at 8:32 pm
lovely job. truely captivating. u have a talent.
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feel free to read my work. my screenname is babybat13
GracesEkphrasis SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2009 at 6:09 pm
I really like this. I think you have some great imagery. My only gripe is that the fourth stanza doesn't rhyme, and the inconsistency of it is distracting.
Good job otherwise. :)
Good job otherwise. :)
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