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I'm made of petals, thorns
more thorn than petal
I'm composed of melody and harsh chords
mostly harsh chords
I'm made of pride and humility
but more pride
I'm made of ingenuity and stupidity
though mostly ingenuity
I feel loneliness and togetherness
usually togetherness
I am creativity and banality
creativity when inspired
and I write the body, unbalanced in its beauty



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Phantom_Girl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 25, 2010 at 6:17 pm
It's not badly written, but to be frank, it came off as a bit conceited. But perhaps that was your intention. The repetition was very nice and the lines flow rather well.
 
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