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I wonder if my feelings were extolled,                                   but it went far around…                                                  hence I was continuously bowled,                                                      

on this earth which is all round.
I called them; they didn’t receive,                                                        

and celebrated alone this congenial eve…                                     

I somehow managed to handle my feelings robust                                 

but, they again threw me to their crust.
The cranes helped to overcome,                                                      

and form my broken heart again…                                               

which took miles and it pains                                              their greeting words HELLO I will miss                                                  

and that moments were not a bliss.
I had a way all round to tell,                                                               

how I felt when they broke my heart…                                                         

the sad song started with ringing bell                                                     

cringing to god in their carts.

I wish they remember me for long,                                       and don’t remember anything wrong…                                                   

with this prayer in my heart                                                              

I frost my feelings to lord in this garrulous world,                                 

far around, far around, far around.




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Esha Baweja said...
Aug. 18 at 4:51 am
This is a poem which I would extol for quite some time.
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 23 at 5:43 am
And you are a friend whom I will always extol
 
bawejaesha02 replied...
Aug. 23 at 9:45 am
Seriously?
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 10:53 am
koi shak:)
 
Sanya said...
Aug. 6 at 5:09 am
Well done keep it up
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 6 at 5:55 am
Thank you
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 6 at 5:55 am
Thank you
 
Sanya said...
Aug. 6 at 5:09 am
Well done keep it up
 
abhi said...
Jul. 18 at 11:18 am
Nic poem
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 20 at 9:13 pm
Oh thanx hope all like it...
 
Diya said...
Jul. 17 at 3:28 am
very nice poem saloni
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 17 at 1:48 pm
thanx diya
 
Diya said...
Jul. 17 at 3:28 am
very nice poem saloni
 
Vartika said...
Jul. 16 at 11:35 am
Awesome poem Saloni .......Gr8
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 17 at 1:48 pm
thanx vartika
 
Pakhuru said...
Jul. 15 at 11:01 am
This is an awesome poem Really unbeatable..!!
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 15 at 11:13 am
Thanx
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 15 at 11:13 am
Thanx
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 15 at 11:13 am
Thanx
 
steffy said...
Jul. 15 at 5:18 am
Awsm saloni
 
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