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A selfish friend

I wonder if my feelings were extolled,                                

  but it went far around…                                                 

hence I was continuously bowled,                                                    On this earth which is all round.

I called them; they didn’t receive,                                                        

and celebrated alone this congenial eve…                                     

I somehow managed to handle my feelings robust                                 

but, they again threw me to their crust.
The cranes helped to overcome,                                                      

and form my broken heart again…                                               

which took miles and it pains                                            

  their greeting words HELLO I will miss                                                  

and that moments were not a bliss.
I had a way all round to tell,                                                               

how I felt when they broke my heart…                                                         

the sad song started with ringing bell                                                     

cringing to god in their carts.

I wish they remember me for long,                                    

   and don’t remember anything wrong…                                                   

with this prayer in my heart                                                              

I frost my feelings to lord in this garrulous world,                                 

far around, far around, far around.






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Bharati said...
Nov. 15, 2016 at 5:22 am
You r like an unpolished diamond,whose brilliance is yet unknown to the world!!! Keep shining and light up many lives with your words.....God bless you!
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 29, 2016 at 10:39 am
Thank you ...!
 
Apurv said...
Nov. 15, 2016 at 5:17 am
Very nice poem saloni ... keep writing and sharing
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 8, 2016 at 10:13 am
Thank you..!
 
Esha Baweja said...
Aug. 18, 2016 at 4:51 am
This is a poem which I would extol for quite some time.
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 23, 2016 at 5:43 am
And you are a friend whom I will always extol
 
bawejaesha02 replied...
Aug. 23, 2016 at 9:45 am
Seriously?
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 25, 2016 at 10:53 am
koi shak:)
 
Sanya said...
Aug. 6, 2016 at 5:09 am
Well done keep it up
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 6, 2016 at 5:55 am
Thank you
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 6, 2016 at 5:55 am
Thank you
 
Sanya said...
Aug. 6, 2016 at 5:09 am
Well done keep it up
 
abhi said...
Jul. 18, 2016 at 11:18 am
Nic poem
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 20, 2016 at 9:13 pm
Oh thanx hope all like it...
 
Diya said...
Jul. 17, 2016 at 3:28 am
very nice poem saloni
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 17, 2016 at 1:48 pm
thanx diya
 
Diya said...
Jul. 17, 2016 at 3:28 am
very nice poem saloni
 
Vartika said...
Jul. 16, 2016 at 11:35 am
Awesome poem Saloni .......Gr8
 
SALONI...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 17, 2016 at 1:48 pm
thanx vartika
 
Pakhuru said...
Jul. 15, 2016 at 11:01 am
This is an awesome poem Really unbeatable..!!
 
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