High School

March 2, 2009
By kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)


I walk down theses crowded halls
nobody meets my eye.
I smile and say hello
they walk on
They run by
no one cares
running and running.
too quick to notice,
too fast to care
faster and faster
until they fall of the universe
where there is
no more



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on May. 28 2009 at 5:23 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Well this is very good. I could relate to your poem. You start off rhyming then stop...It's cool! I have written several poems like that...so keep up the good work!!

*******p.s. if you have time, please check out my poems. rate, comment please. much appreciated!

on Mar. 20 2009 at 5:55 pm
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

JulianHale- thank you for your comment...it wassn't mean...umm when exactly does it ryme? I didn't notice

-kissingdawn331

on Mar. 20 2009 at 12:57 am
Madelyn1231 GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Why must the bounds of love and hate continually be so muddled?

I really like this one, however i think that the rhyming is sorta off. i know poems dont "have" to rhyme (mine dont) but i think you should stick with one or the other. i swear im not trying to be mean, dont take this the wrong way. cuz you rhyme in the beginning but then stop... i liked it otherwise though :]

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on Mar. 15 2009 at 12:19 am
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

Nice, I really like it!




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