My First Roller Coaster

February 26, 2009
By Max Klaver BRONZE, Buckingham, Pennsylvania
Max Klaver BRONZE, Buckingham, Pennsylvania
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My First Roller Coaster
By Max. K
We stand in line
For what seems like hours
It feels like we move an inch per hour
Finally, we get to the front
of the huge line
And board the coaster
'You still want to do this'
I ask my friend nervously
'Yes' he responded
But I could tell he was just as afraid as me
The coaster started to inch forward
'Well, we can't get off now'
Said my friend
The ride crawled up the incline
We reached the to
And stopped
'Here we go'
I say
And with that we shot down
We went through loopdey loop
And went up side down
But in seconds the ride was over
'Want to go again'
I ask


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