Poem 4 You

February 25, 2009
By Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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you made me laugh when i was sad
you made me smile when times were bad
you held me tight when times were worst
you kissed me and you always put me first
now heres the time when somethings change
i know it's weird, it might sound strange
it's you i love, there is no other man for me
you opened my heart and you have the key
you set me free
and you let me be

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this poem was because my boyfriend Aldrich is this wonderful dude i met and we have been dating for a while and now i think that i actually love him that he is the one for me.

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on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:19 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
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awww yeah times have been A LOT better for me. this was when i was like depressed sorta it was a good way to get my feelings out without hurting anyone

on Feb. 24 2010 at 9:07 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

Beautiful!!!! I can relate, and honestly... it describes my life!!! =..)

on Feb. 18 2010 at 2:43 pm
Ellie.M. PLATINUM, Santa Paula, California
47 articles 1 photo 133 comments
awww thanks im sorry :/ Do u have writing on here.?

twiwrite GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:45 pm
twiwrite GOLD, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
none :P

this one crushed me after i read it it reminds me of my ex who i love dearly.




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