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Stripped Bare

Wrapped in black lace
Didn't you know you're just his toy for today?
Your beautiful mind was just his to play
& inside you always wanted more,
but knew no other way.

A break from cold metal
Between your legs
In your heart
And on that stage.

He promised you more.
And for a second you thought
Maybe he'd stay.
But it was just another one night stand
And baby this time you paid.





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Only,I This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 12:28 pm
This is amazing. I've never read anything that's delt with this situation before. It's great. The imagery is very good.
 
Courtney H. said...
Nov. 7, 2009 at 3:27 am
This is amaaazing and sad 2 say somethin i have been caught up n b4...i know thee feeling and reading this was lik experiencing it all over again...bad feeling but great poem i love it...thankz 4 thee comment on "incomplete women" it was one of my first im glad u liked it>.~CoCo
 
Hayz~Hardcore said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 10:58 am
Not to sound like a whore cause im honestly not iv been in this situation soo many times i was just looking for love but the guy wasnt...Btw thanks for ur comment it ment soo much too me :)
 
Inkspired said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 3:17 pm
This is another really well written piece! The emotion is intense, and the images are well created. Beautiful in a cold, bitter way.
 
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