lost

February 16, 2009
By blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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i am lost

unable to touch
cant feel
lacking lust
wanting you so much

unable to see
who i am or who you want me to be
look in the mirrors
in tears
over the scars
from your childhood years

unable to hear
the voice that comforted the tears
ignored advice
thought i was able to suffice for me living here
well i was wrong
deaf to your screams
piercing through me
killing me

unable to smell
ignorant to the metallic scent of blood
lingering in the air
the repugnant odor
unable to cease

unable to taste
mouth numb
like novacaine
but really from
mind numbing lies

i am lost


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on Aug. 17 2009 at 11:56 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
160 articles 0 photos 105 comments
wut did u do w/ it?????

on Aug. 16 2009 at 9:39 pm
Dancer4life GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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I love this poem i used it for a project in school. I hope you dont mind,




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